not bad, but a bit domestic. more spatial explorations would have been desirable. buildings generally don't fly, you need to add context in your 3D (and some life). the reason for the symmetry and form of the two tanks is not clear. how do you deal with the property boundary? can the neighbors see the tanks? that would be interesting. 

the model saved you! good progress and nice sectional development in the model. the drawings are too diagrammatic for 1:50 and the perspective doesn't help either. what do you want to convey? try to give each drawing a caption, like a picture, if you can't then choose another angle or viewpoint. it can be simple, like adriatic sea, 8am with coffee. or : movie scene 17/ 4, 10 more to go. and: shooting a movie takes up more space than is available in your structure (room heights etc.) but at least you put the cameras in...

beautiful model. thanks for changing the section and let the trees go to the ground! the overall idea could have been stretched further and the natural slope better integrated in the design development. lots of potential.

section: a jury's favorite! plans: need to be redrawn. the section has to read in plan as well, you choose the wrong graphics. bring them next week, then I can explain. very nice project full of exploration and spatial energy. 

again, good use of model, 3D, photorealistic representation. design lacks a bit of spatial diversity in the left part of this photo. the red hand drawn line on the lower part of the sheet is not to be repeated, it looks as if you ran out of time and quickly had to finish something...overall better than last time.

good project, drawings of diverse quality (ex: movement through tank great, design elements less successful), facade to be discussed, for me it doesn't add to the building, it has to be much more that form. model not finished due to cut finger, finish for orals in june/july.

the snake skin concept was not translated into space, despite several commendable efforts. sometimes one has to change the concept post design...the process will be acknowledged, i would take this project as experience how sth does not work out and leave it, rather concentrate on the next project.

the garden idea could have been explored more throughout the building. but good drawings. project unfinished due to sickness of student. finish and re-hand in on date to be announced. 

generally promising project, however largely unfinished in terms of design development. the drawings look hasty, as if not a lot of time has spend on them. this scale requires more information. please finish for the mid term oral.

very good project, consistent throughout, however, the diagrams can improve. they are difficult to read for someone who does not know the project. drawings very nice but a bit pale.