good story, good design development, facades as discussed before, not necessarily the final version. layout did not work that well this time, the blue line drawings worth a try but not sure if needs to be repeated. it may also be the collage style, the glueing of differently sized colored renderings next to typed text, not properly layouted. one would keep the top line consistent in this case for example. model ok, but not outstanding. good work to be improved in the next project.